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Ian's avatar

For the first part of this story I felt that you had been reading my diary!

Penelope Frothe's avatar

Aw. Hugs. 🤗💕😘 I have no idea where the story is going but I think it will have a happy ending...um, ya, I'm sure it will 🤭😂

The Real Michael E's avatar

Ms. Frost is light years ahead, isn't she? The tale has a named date and her named friends who abandoned him, an icily-named woman whose named daughter Chloe married...what's-his-name. Because his name is irrelevant. The story is directed to each responsive male reading it. So naming him may come later or not at all. But the power differential is so apparent. Thursday for coffee sounds wonderful, Ms. Frothe. Can't wait. This one is going to be explosive! ❤️

Penelope Frothe's avatar

Oh my heart. Thank you. I only hope I can live up to the expectations...I do fret about that, lol. Still, I love to write and life is learning so we keep going. And you know I appreciate all of your kind words and support. It makes writing through the fear all the easier. 😍💕😍😘

The Real Michael E's avatar

Ms. Frothe, you should know by now how highly I hold you in regard and how much you have affected me. You however have no expectations to live up to except your own. Just write. I am so impressed with your authorship. I cannot speak for anyone save myself, but I ❤️U😘💕💖

L.G. Kyner's avatar

I have never read a more intelligent and enticing story that creates a dynamic electricity between two people that seems as realistic as life itself. I hope we will get to read about the Thursday meeting for coffee in the near future.

If not, “we’ll always have Paris!”

Thank you.

Penelope Frothe's avatar

Aw. Thank you. Yes, this series is going to continue. I hope to alternate between a chapter of Ms Marsh and a chapter of this story and so on. But I've already started writing Chapter 2... 😊😍

Vladim's avatar

Oh my God, how masterfully you can construct with words everything you need to put a man into a trance-like state and make him submit. This verbal power is transmitted so strongly that it's impossible to resist. It seems this new series will deprive me of peace and sleep again, and I'll see you in my head again.

Penelope Frothe's avatar

lol. Well, I hope you don't stay up too late... 😍🤭