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Frenchie_Cheshire's avatar

This story is hypnotic. Good length, classy. My little engine is leaking…

Penelope Frothe's avatar

I'm delighted you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading. And commenting (sincerely). Feedback (of whatever kind) is so helpful. 😍💕

David's avatar

Great chapter. Loved it. Now I am waiting for when she Pegs him.

Penelope Frothe's avatar

lol...hmmm...that sounds like an interesting idea 🤭😂🤭

LiteraryEx's avatar

Unbelievable chapter by an amazing writer. Bravo.

Penelope Frothe's avatar

Oh my. I'm blushing. Literally blushing. Thank you for such a lovely compliment. 😍🤭😍

Jimmy's avatar

A great chapter! Im an old man that is becoming more comfortable with topics that I never understood. You make it all so natural and heart warming. I am totally hooked anxiously waiting for the next part!

Penelope Frothe's avatar

Aw. That is such a wonderful thing to say and so gratifying. I love that you are enjoying it. And feeling more comfortable is my goal as a writer. This is so nice. Thank you. 😘😍💕

Arthur's avatar

Habit formation. One or two days at the gym isn’t life changing. But it’s a door opened to form a positive trend. Donald needs to keep putting on his gym clothes or reasonable facsimile thereof 🙂

Penelope Frothe's avatar

lol. Exactly....the nerve to think that pleasing his wife one time solves everything...🤭😂

Vincent Mazzotta's avatar

What a great chapter!!!! Loved this❤️❤️❤️❤️

I previously stated every man needs a Ms. Marsh. I was wrong. Every person needs a Ms.Marsh in their lives. The world would be a much better place if we did. TY for writing this story

Penelope Frothe's avatar

Oh my gosh. Thank you. I'm so delighted by the kindness and the enthusiasm for this story. It is challenging me as a writer but comments like yours encourage me to keep pushing myself. So glad you love it. 😘😍😊💕